Call and Response by Patricia McCue

 

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Call and Response

 

Trills and whistles at first light.

Are there patterns in this music?

A secret language

or just the sound of joy?

 

Each summer musicians gather 

to learn ancient tunes passed on by ear 

from our ancestors.

 

Mountains covered in fleeting clouds -

a fitting backdrop for fiddle music.

 

As the sun approaches its high point

early morning birdsong evolves

into a more muted soundtrack

accompanied by an audible breeze.

 

There is beauty in simplicity.

A basic jig, unadorned,

rivals more complicated reels.

A song sparrow of muted colors

has one of the sweetest calls.

 

“Let’s start with a jig,

a lovely old tune.”

He plays a phrase.

Fingers move deftly across strings.

We answer - not quite there.

 

“And again.”

We mimic his call.

Catbirds in a circle defending a nest.

 

The exchange continues.

From fiddles and assorted beaks,

exquisite notes soar in unison 

carried Home by the weeping willow.


This poem was first published in Otherwise Engaged: A Literature and Arts Journal (Volume 12)


© Patricia McCue



Patricia McCue

Patricia McCue is a retired teacher of middle school science. Her poems have appeared in Woods ReaderPoetry Breakfast, Nature of Our Times and various anthologies.  In her free time she studies and plays Traditional Irish Music on the violin.


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